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Volume 1, Number 2 August, 2006
The Question of Laura, Short fiction by Jeff Neale
They never accused me of her murder, and that is good, because I did not kill her, nor did I cause her disappearance. Honestly, I do not even know if she is dead. I do not know where she is. True, at first I was a suspect because I was the last one with her and to see her alive. However, we were only children; she was ten and I eleven. We were not really boyfriend and girlfriend, we were too young for that, but she was my best friend.

I think not finding her body has been the most difficult thing for her parents. Without a body, there is no closure, and it leaves open the possibility that she may one-day return if she simply ran away. However, I know my friend did not run away. There was nowhere for her to go. There was no way out of the silo.

The silo connects to the barn. It is fifty feet tall, circular, and made out of solid concrete with a sealed and locked metal door at the ground level entrance. At the time of the "accident" this door was securely closed and locked. There is a three-foot square access opening cut in the concrete halfway up on the inside of the barn at the level of the hayloft. When not in use the opening remained covered with an easily removable piece of plywood. Inside, the silo has a metal ladder that spans from top to bottom and used for checking grain levels, moisture content, and cleaning at the times the silo is empty. It was empty on the day we were playing in the barn, and it was through this opening that Laura crawled and started down the ladder and never returned.

Incredible as it sounds, she simply vanished. One minute I heard the echo of her laughter as she began climbing down, and the next minute her scream, followed by a loud sucking sound like the last bit of water draining from a bathtub, and then she was gone. I could do nothing. I was terrified. I yelled her name several times, and even leaned over the opening searching, but I saw and heard nothing, just the empty bottom of the silo. The last thing I remember of that day was running toward the house screaming Laura's name.

The barn, the silo, and the surrounding area were searched for more than a week with no sign of Laura. Tracking hounds were only able to follow her scent as far as the opening in the concrete where she disappeared. Oddly, one of the hounds refused to approach the opening, and instead backed away whinning as though fearful of what lay beyond.

Even now after thirty years, I often lay awake at night and wonder if my fate would have been the same had I followed her down the ladder that day. When I do sleep, I have terrifying nightmares about Laura. I see her continually spiraling downward in total darkness toward a never ending abyss while reaching out frantically for me and screaming my name.


Jeff Neale is the author of several short stories, many of which are available on his blog,
The Write Thing. His hobbies include reading, golf, and music. Jeff is in the process of writing his first novel.
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